Thought both rhyme schemes needed help...

Alot of flow stumbled on both sides...

But to be honest, I gotta go against the grain and throw to Posiden.

I just vibed with it more, understood it, and have lived it.

I read Filed's twice and still didn't "get it".

I just couldn't find the emotion behind the message.

I guess it lacked imagery for me as well.

Posiden may not have needed as much because one can draw on their own memories with his verse.

Good battle, but by an edge, Posiden

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