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Old 01-26-04, 11:42 AM   #7
RythmicTendicies
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You had some outragous slow here, it blended in with your vocab here, you never used 3 letter words to rhyme, syllables, flow was dope 'cos of this, bars were the same length as well, some nice structure.

Your had some good wordplay in here:
"But coagulation doesn't occur, because I stir obsessively." - dunno if anyone noticed that one...thought it was well dope....nice complexity.

Liked the concept of conspiracy and it was played out well, got in nice and deep, didn;t just dance around the edge you took us right into it, ya know.....4/5 some dope shit..should be nominated for the Jan award thingy.
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