This was ill no doubt......an now curious to read the first part........

"the road of progress is a neverending path
theres no limit to our limits, forever it lasts
this cup is a trinket, but a symbol of skill
you've taken the next step to being truly ill"

i like that shit.....gives a positive hope to all.....good lines.....good structure as well....keep doin yo thing an hit me up anytime........peace