Calm Down Kid. . It's Better For Him To Do That Then Have Two Replies That Sound The Same. . It's Called Being Repetitive, He Avoided That Happening With His Reply. . Anyway. . Flow Was Good, Content Was Ok. . Even Your Lines A Little Bit More So You Can Capture A Better Flow. . Multi's I Saw Were Ok . . Try Expanding And Becoming More Complex With Your Multi Placement In Your Rhymes, Ya Follow ? Oh, And Don't Take My Word For Any Of This I Just Told You. . I've Only Been Doin This Here For 7 Years. . No Reason To Take My Suggestions Into Consideration. . Lol, Kiddin Kid, Pz.

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