Ummm i thought this was ok........but i hope you wrote this in like 2 minutes.........if not well ah damn! j/k man and Pen i hope you aint serious? Nah anyway hit me up when you post up a song! Id like to see what you can do when your serious.......hit me up anytime.........look up my most recent piece called YOUR MY WORST ENEMY or just click one of my links....Thanks.........Peace