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Old 01-26-04, 02:40 PM   #4
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Pretty Ill Man, For Real. . I Was Feeling The Multi's, They Helped The Flow Tremendously. . Flow Was On-Point Because Of The Multi's. . Vocab Was Good. . Only Part I Wasn't Feeling Was The Abudance Of The End Rhyme "-Tion" In That One Verse. . You Had Some Quotables Tho. .

"the road of progress is a neverending path
theres no limit to our limits, forever it lasts
this cup is a trinket, but a symbol of skill
you've taken the next step to being truly ill"

^ ^ Dope Way To Close This. Overall, I Was Feeling This. . Pz.

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