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Old 01-26-04, 02:44 PM   #14
KISI
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I agree about the one sided nature of this battle. Diverse came with what he saw as efficient enough to kill matt matt. Diverse had nice lines like,

Claims westside but can't find it without a compass and mapquest
Don't worry i'll break you in though, like a 20 year old mattress


matt matt, i don't know if it's just me, but a lot of your lines didn't seem to rhyme or make much sense, and i don't mean this in a dissing manner, it seems you don't have rhythm in your head when you write. I personally always have a beat or type of rhythm in my head when i write. So the flow of your verse actually, lacked flow. But everyone gets better with time. Good luck to the both of you.