Koala boy came nice with the first verse, second i didnt appreciate as much actually .. the vocabulary was one of its stronger points, though the depth didnt really seem to be there to take this piece to its full potential.

Termz killed it with the imagery .. right of the bat i got into his take, nicely worded, writers voice actually got better as the piece went on, nice transition to carry the piece .. wordplay helped, a lot! Ended quite abruptly i felt, but none the less a good piece. Well written.

Id say Speeches Blunt did enough to edge this. Nice match up. = D