Lol.

Sarc - your bars were too fucking stretched out, and a lot of the rhyming was one syllable - even the internals. Right from the start your wording was off i felt, you need to actually think each line out, dont sacrifice your content just to make the fucking piece rhyme!!!! You need to give it an equal balance, say what you want to say with multi's, while keeping the content at a high standard.

I dont want to get into Maven's cause he sucks, and talks gay to me on aim -

pitchblackprism: nothing quite like a steaming chalice of semen being poured into my ass of doom

but he did enough to win here.

Peace!