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Old 01-26-04, 04:29 PM   #14
Envy Styles
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Autopsy- Nice Verse, Nice Punches They Hit him Pretty Hard, But You Could Improve On Structure And Flow~! Ok Wordplay Ok Flow, Bad Structure, Ok Vocab, Weak Verse, Try To Use More Vocab And Fix Your Structure

Brethren- Nope, Ok Punches, They Hit Like Weak, YOu Can Elevate, Juss COme Harder And Put Some Creativity In There, Nice Wordplay Bad Structure, Ok Flow, Bad Vocab, Weak Verse, Weak Battle

PUnches- A
Flow- A
Structure- B
Wordplay- TIe
Vocab- Tie
Creativity- A

Vote Autopsy, Hit My Battle In My Sig Please
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