hmmm
I couldn't find a flow to this, but I'm sure it's written to the beat you're recording, so thats cool. I liked that you worked in more multies than usual, but theres always room for more.

I'm not even gonna get into the content cause it was quotable as fuck.
This seemed like a very commercial rhyme. I prefer topical pieces, but hey, to each his own =)

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