dw
Not bad, certainly not lyrics wise.
But ur delivery was kind of choppy.
The beat did not compliment ur voice very well..
An above all that, it sounded like u had a cold..
..Maybe it's the mic, cause i also heared u breathin in it.
..So fix that, or hold it further away from ur mouth.
Not bad overall but also the quality was not optimal.

CarsonJet
Your rich ass probably has better equipment,
Cause ur quality was alot better..
..The singin as intro..a no-no..didnt came out right.
But ur delivery after that made up for it.
A few blanks, but overall ur delivery & the quality gave u the upper hand.
Ok lyric wise.
But its audio..

vote CarsonJet