i know why you kids gave maven tha vote.......cuz yall are lazy Bastads, i think i'm gonna go tha otha way on this one, ok battle......tha breakdown:

TSar Cas- rhyme scheme- 6.5, story- 8.5, flow- 6.5, total- 21.5

yeah.....your diction and rhyme scheme need improvement, but your story was solid, your shit might have been long.......but you actually took tha time to explain everythin, mad props on tha story

Maven- rhyme scheme- 8, story- 6, flow- 7, total- 21

nyce rhyme scheme, i feel that your verse was too short....and you didnt explain everythin as well as you should have, expand on your ideas....was not feelin your story as much, but nyce drop

i say casm edged this out with a betta story, which everyone ^^^ above me did not read....lol, my vote goes to Casm, no hard feelins and may tha best man win, peace, 1

p.s. go vote on my ish

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