^ don't mind him, he doesn't know what hes talking about.

This was very nice, propaganda. I'm really feeling this because you have a lot of good points, i like to see opinionated pieces like this. The flow was fine, that dev kid can't read quality pieces i guess. The schemes were set up so nicely complimenting the next. I really felt this a lot and the saving faces was used as symbolism throughout the whole piece. Very well written right here. Much respect on that. That kid up there just doesn't understand it much, cause of the complexity of it. I understand it though, and you deserve the praise for it.