Illmatic

Fatal D a fat ass his cholestral is fatal he got them big double d’s/
Ive mastered a’s b’s and c’s cut of his knees and watch him fall wit e’s/
Abc punches are played... they've been for awhile
This dude is so big we call him that masta/
Instead of slim fast this dude needs slim fasta/
What? wack

(aight enough playin around illmatic came to battle)
why say that?

illmatics always commanding battles, so fatal d claimin he spittin hard get his fat mouth filled with sand and gravel/
fatal D he just stands and babbles, my allegiance-blinds plus whenever it's beef-we-shine like tanning cattle!/
Not the greatest punch

go ahead and actually-spit, i drop ruthless-bowels this stupid-child wanna get abused-wit-vowels/
it's useless-now, cause iilmatics so quick ill take two free shots like shooting-fouls!/
Not bad... basketball personals are kinda played though

illmatics got fat dudes and boobs rushing for some shine, turn-em-away burn-em-ablaze you must be out your mind/
when im busting from the nine, trust me im divine, punch fatal D in the chest so hard, my fist could take custody of your spine!!/
Not a really good punch

(finishin him off)
Why u need to say that?

attack ur lungs leavin u internally-stressed, theres no scale to measure my skill i blow out rictors/
these lyrics are leavin u verbally-blessed, and fatal could’ve been born in a mexican household and still not come out a victor/
ok closing

Overall - take a trip to WEC and i can h elp you wit alot, your structure, flow, and punches need work... dont space ya bars, cut down ya lines, drop the / at the end, drop the --- inbetween words and drop the (finishing him off) crap


Fatal

who the fuck you think you are, saying shit that means nuthin
talking like a gangstar, im calling it, i no you bluffin
Meh.. no punch
see D did his research, found out use a wack ass faggart
sits at home wearing slippers,sipping tea and watching taggart
Blah.. faggart? not a good punch at all
and that shit that on the inernet(sheesh) dont get me started
some real shit shit man you more that just retarted.
blah.. not a direct punch
stuttering every second, cant seem to get it out
how the fuck we spose to hear you wid your balls stuck in yo mouth
think ive heard that before..or shit very close to it

illmaticstatic where'd you get that from a comic book!! for fucks sake!!
to tell the truth you sound more like a cross dresser that belongs on ricki lake!!
An actual punch this time

Overall - this was a very weak battle.. you both need to visit Wackness Emergancy Center and get help... but illmatic took it cuz he actually threw some punches

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