nizzle

U Call Yoself Matt-matt//
But If U Meet Me U Be Meetin A Baseball Bat//
Right... try to be more complex
And I Hate To Have To Be So Rude//
But When Im Battlin A Faggit I Have No Choice But To Beat This Dude//
U wanna bat a faggit? as in literally beat him and stick ya hands on his skin
And U Can Say What U Want//
But When I Lift Up My Shirt U Better Duck Cuz Des Bullets Gona Hurt//
Didnt rhyme
I Anit A Killa//
But U Will Get Merked//
Dont rhyme
I'll Chop Yo Body Up Then U Will Get Served//
To The Fiends On My Block Where They Like Tha Work//
And The Semi-automatic Left U A Stick Cuz Yo Body Got Jerked//
Blah closer

Overall - You need some serious elevation, take a trip to wackness emergancy center and il help u beter your punches...they need serious work


Matt

my flow is so hurtful and KEEN makin you feel awkaward
the last capitalized adjective is your signature backward
Not the greatest rhyme, ok punch
but im not here just to make creative word jumbles
im here to slit your nizzie so deep your throat crumbles
wordplay... not bad
ill pull your head back using your own hair
your neck opens up like what you use to spit your wack air
Meh..not that good
i open it up enough to look down your esophagous
seein nothin but female organs during this unofficial autops
not feeling it, since 6 lines have been about his throat
starting to feel guilty cause youre so young or YNG
so i end your suffering, and change your abreviation to RIP
Alittle bit of word play, not a bad ending

Overall - you had some alright wordplay and some ok punches

My vote - mat, he came harder wit punches, he had some word play and personals and his flow was much better

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