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Old 01-26-04, 09:17 PM   #14
wogzta
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Bleh... this wasnt a very good battle... both need to elevate greatly on punches and structure....

Neither really had good punches, or flow.... some of the lines were a bit stretched... overall illmatic hit with more punches, and he actually had some multies which is good.... both need to improve your vocab and use some personals... also fix up your structure so that all lines are equal....

and illmatic, dont use the (finishing him off) type crap... its not needed

vote - illmatic

hit this link up for me with an honest vote... thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109734