thnx 4 the feed bak pplz!! its apreciated, i left the vocab short bcause i didn't feel like working on the poem to make it better (word wise) and i didn't mind the line figures too much because wen u listen to the B*S* that i do at the tyme, you don't necesarily worry too much about anything but i wonder if one day ill get to leave everything and just be happy, for just 1 day. so thnx 4 thu replys and i hope wat i just sed mad some sort of sense

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