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Old 01-26-04, 09:35 PM   #7
.Iknoevel.
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B.G.

I'll pop his voice box when I hoist glocks with weary-eyed focals
.............Leavin holes in it deeper than Barry White Vocals
Decent opening
Shit's like Sex Ed Classes when dude gets clapped up
This fag'll be in the morgue just another fruit that's wrapped up
not the greatest, not the worst
I slap weak emcees like you for makin noise when they speak
And when your bitches screamin that's the 'Voice of the Streetz'
Some wordplay...
Like 'X-Files Reruns' for votes he keeps givin niggas 'Scully'
Murder him, left body parts dismembered all over the 'Street Gully'
Ok wordplay[B]
'I'll bet 10' on it...tryna shank me wit butter knives? that's lame
'Kickin his dome' now 'losin's on his mind' cuz 'da-feet is on brain'
[B]so-so

Grabbin da Tek and start popppin one of Dynasty Soldiers
.....Applyin da 'heat ta his mug' like 'Cofee Folgers'
ok closing

Overall - you had some decent punches and ok wordplay...coulda came harder though

Gullie

im nice wit the flows.....lyrically....ya WEAK!:
but tech to ya throat....and leave u wit out a "Voice" for "Da Streetz":
Ok opening
what u think....i dont walk wit my macks out?:
crazy..only time u beat me...is when "God" "Blacks" out:
decent wordplay
its gullie dawg....told u...ya need levitation wit ya words:
say u beat me.....but im the insperation to this herb:
no punch
told u once.....im ya damn INSPERATION:
bout to "son" this fag....and i aint talkin bout family relations.....:
Little played.. just ok
is more like........lungin and dissin:
cause like blind boxer......all ya punches is missin!:....
Played closer... meh

Overall - you came ok, word play was there alittle...ok punches

My vote - Black God... he came harder with his punches and they were more complex, he also had more wordplay
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