Ok, Here's tha breakdown:

Illmatic Static - some of yoru punches sounded great because of the multi's, but you over did it... there was nothin but multi's, which doesn't really do it. You need more personals, less concern for multi's and harder punches, but all around it was an aight verse. tip - don't start off your verse 'playin around' or 'warmin up' just come out and merk

and

Fatal D - fatally pathetic. Where were the punches? Personals? Hell, a multi? Man you have a lot of work to do, but never fear, there will be many more a sonning to help you elevate LOL keep working on punches, leave the silly kid-insults to the kids

vote obviously goes to Illmatic.

yall hit these up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110015

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109986