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Old 01-26-04, 10:28 PM   #9
yungthug619
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one, nice verse, dope punches, ending
was tight, you need a couple harder punches,
flow was aight, but not the best, you didnt
have one personal in their dawg, you structure
was pretty good.

definifte, aight verse, aight punches, but not hard
enough, and you needed a couple more punches,
yet again i didnt see any personals from neither of you,
you need to work on that, structure was horrible dawg,
keep workin on your lyrics dawg you'all elevate.

my vote: one

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