It doesnt matter if they were last week events... pop stars, wrestling, and Idol jokes have been done to death... Born To Kill also had some harder hitting punches and personals... he set it up so that every line was a punch, but you had some filler...

Also, on a side note, you dont need so many exclamation marks... disses are supposed to be greatly exclaimed anyway, and since the majority of battles are full of punches and disses, there'd be waaaayy too many ! on screen if everyone did it...

hope i helped, even though im not that good myself