bonespitter, some things i liked, some things i didn't.. thought it was a little plain and could use more wordplay and creativity. harder punches too. not understandable if u had to hurry. lyric.. alot of it I liked, hit him hard with his dr.mario.. could've expanded into some others things as well. but over creative, nice verse, better punches. u got this in my mind.
vote-lyric
Hit my battle up please, and return the favor. slept on real bad.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...24&page=1&pp=15