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Old 01-27-04, 12:53 AM   #12
LuMiNåRy Te-X-t
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bonespitter, aight verse, you needed harder
punches, im not sure if i even saw one in there,
your strusture wasnt all that good either, your
flow was aight, but i couldnt really catch da rhythm.

lyric, your verse was nice, some decent punches,
you needed a couple more though, but its all good,
i was feelin your flow it was nice, structure was aight,
but not to good, and that duck hunt line was dope dawg.

my vote: lyric