Bone- I dont think your shit flowed too good at all. You had some attempts at punches but the flow just fucked it up. You also came weak with your punch attempts. Be more creative an work on your flow a little.

Lyric- Your verse was pretty nice. The whole thing was a personal, which made it even better. Very creative. Some very funny shit, i enjoyed readin it.

OVERALL- Lyric for creativity, flow an all that good shit
Good battle an keep elevating guys