ok The last two post are fuckin identical but.

Bone ya verse was decent. If ya gonna rush it dog at least put some better punches in there. The structure your usin is alright but don't run on ya shit. Your verse about ya lines could have been better if you chnged the punch at eh end wit the red black and blue thing.

Now lyric. Ya killed his avy and his name. you had some pretty good punches and ya format was alright too. Ya lines were good cause you had pretty good personals in there also Bonespitter lacked in that department. Don't keep it so simple and you would've had this one easy.

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