flowdro takes this one....you guys are new but both have potential. both you focus more on punches....setup then punch. they have to connect and the punchline needs to be hard, whitty, and surprising. need2flow your lines were a little stretched so that kind of threw the flow of your verse off. just focusing on connecting your punches based on the concept of the punch, rather than on the rhyme word. do you know what i mean? anyways it just seemed the punches that flowdro threw hit harder and some connected pretty decend. need2flow your verse was good...just focus on making it all disses cuz thats what wins battles here.

vote: flowdro