K took this one. good verse man, im impressed you really have elevated alot. you came hard the whole way throught with some clever shit right there. hard hitting punches/personals...good shit. only thing i could say to work on is that when you are using that type of structure make sure the lines arent too long cuz it hurts the flow. the ... kind of serves for a pause then you get to the punchline and your like wow...but nice verse some of the best ive seen from you. 007...your verse was decent but ive seen you come harder.....second to last line wasnt even a punch and you need constant disses to take this battle....some of your lines were worded a bit funny and some didnt hit that hard at all. nice verse though. you had K in the flow category.

vote K

could you guys please hit this up...i took the time to vote on your battle...
people have been reading it...but dont wanna vote for some reason...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109418