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Old 01-27-04, 03:20 AM   #22
Telekinetic
Poetic Justice
 
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Cata- You had some pretty good punches in there. Structure could use some work. An the midget lines are played to death. An the stabbed in a shootout was pretty played too.

Wise- Nice verse. Very personal an funny. Damn good drop for you. Had good multies structure an flow. Wasent a whole lot not to like.
"U a violated bitch..ran off screaming you'd been assulted by a male
Pretty comfortable w/ being gay..so I'm a stay away from ft.Lauderdale" That killed it

OVERALL-Wise with personals that killed