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Old 01-27-04, 07:58 AM   #2
Dev
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both are pretty basic stuff, little bit of wordplay, but didnt really carry..... out of the 2 the second was better, slightly better flow and a bit more complex, tho still basic... try and even ya verses out a bit, and work on improving ya scheme, with some more complexity, internals n shit..... check mine out
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