Thread: ~Unborn's Fate~
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Old 01-27-04, 08:28 AM   #8
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its was good.
nice use of mutil's a bit to much..but theres nothing wrong with that
topic was ok
wished u could of finished it. vocab was ok too.
pretty basic flow nothing really caught my eye over all you get a 6.5 outta 10.


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