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Old 01-27-04, 09:05 AM   #13
Soulfire
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From: Brooklyn, NY
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This battle was wack, but...

Yung Thug: Ur structure sucked. Matbe u should put it in lines, it's more effective that way. Ur punches were just ok. Decent wordplay. Keep comin' wit it.

<+>: Ur verse was decent. I just basically enjoyed it more. He took ya on punches, except for the with the vagina... had me rollin'. Nice creativity, wordplay, and metas.

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Not every day do you see a newbie bring it to da table like dat. Keep rhymin'.