Sup Sicknez, this was a really great piece..Really nicely written with vivid imagery and bars almost dripping with sadness..It's great that everyone who reads it can relate in their own general way to the very specific experience you wrote about..Some lines I really liked were,

"Favourable winds in my hair
sounds of forever falling in despair"

"Chasing a star that leaves me behind
floating in the air of broken heaven"

^Imagery is amazing, and the writing in parts like those I quoted are what sets this piece apart from every other "heartbreak" poem I have read..Good job distinguishing it. I also liked the title and the way it incorporated into the end very emotionally..Very nice piece all around..I felt it..Stay up and keep writing.
Pz