--[Flow]---
Your flow was what hit me first it was off-da-hook...think you really executed some dope interals here..dope structure, all the bars were basically the same length...some brutal bars in this...

--[Vocab]--
You showed some good vocab in several places here, but it lacked consistancy, aim to achieve this...some lines were dope and other lines came across as a little simplistic, work on it..but you showed some real potential here...

"Thats just the way we live and it's time for a name change
But that's impossible unless EVRYONE is on the same page
The presidentail spot is nothin but control and a paycheck" - whoa! It sums up these 2 points (flow and vocab).

--[Concept]--
You pulled the topic off well, even though it is fast becoming a played out topic as rap goes through this "revolution" as some might call it, but you put a nice personal perspective to it and it came across well...

--[Overall]--
Thought the flow was the best aspect of this piece..vocab as i said was a little inconsitant and the concept has been played but you pulled it off generally pretty well...3/5..work on what i mentioned..but dope piece.

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not done one of these breakdowns in about 6 months..lol.