This was a great piece..kind of scattered in a way but very uniform in another way..Very intense and thought provoking message and some lines were just outstanding...

"i see no expression in beauty
only how it hurts those that it hasn't found"

"yet i stand so cold and so alone
my breathe is seen as smoke in the cold air
only to do nuttin but dissappear"

Very intriguing and well written..
Stay up, nice writez.