This actually the first piece I've ever read in this forum, matter of fact this is the first time I've ever strayed into this neck of the woods.

I think I'll start coming in here more often now that I see some actual talent is in here.

Onto the piece.....


This is a very personal poem, spoken from the heart which, ironically, is about someone who doesn't.

"A letter of his love, it wasn't much to engage,
But his loverboy blood never dripped on the page."

That is my favorite line in this piece, not because it flows together so well but it is a powerful conclusion and perfectly summarizes the concept of the poem, written.

The structure of the poem was all-in-all well done, and the rhyming was there, but not essential to the piece. All in all, a good read and I'm talking to you about it now, so....I'll tell you the rest online.