Aside from the fact Aus spelt the word sympathy wrong, he got this.
Derive your story was really nice, but the flow was very choppy at times, and I even got lost in the story line. Aus, your verse flowed amazing and it made me cry (not really). It was very touching, and the imagery was much better than Derives, you're very good at painting a picture. I liked the structure better as well, the short lines made it sound good off my tounge.
Nice topical battle, but Aus comes out on top here.
