Concept Has Been Used Before, But I Was Feelin Your Approach. . Flow Was Consistent, Althought Some Lines Were A Bit Stretched, That Didn't Hamper The Flow. . Multi's Were Nice, Although You Over Used The Rap Rhyme In This Piece. . Meaning You Had The Last Word On A Line Rhyming With Rap Too Many Times, Just Watch That. . I Can Tell By The Message That Were Really Trying For Vocab, So No Worries On That. . Content Was Good Man, Chorus Was Pretty Good Too. . Overall, You Are Improving With Every Drop And I Hope To Continue To See This Upward Trend, Pz.
Just cause they say I cant Rap like "THAT"!!! ....If this is Hip Hop....Fuck it you can have it back.....//
^ ^ Real Dope Way To Close The Track Before The Final Chorus.
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^ ^ ^ Click Um, Feedback Appreciated, Thanks Duke.