Since you addressed the structure an you said it flows then i wont say anything bout that..........but this was a very very complex (ina good way) rhyme....i got lost at times but my interest was there in its entirety...i would love to hear what it would sound as an audio....oh an this line-

Rhymes Have Gained Eloquence, I Remain Heaven Sent
I Surpassed A Sixth N Made Hip Hop My Seventh Sense

That shit was Ill!~Peace....an thanks for your honesty on my feedback its very much appreciated...