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1-10 Feed Back Open Mic FA|TAL LyRIKzZ
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01-27-04, 02:26 PM
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Menik
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Yeah this was alright.....but dont put it in paragraph form like that, put it line on top of line so its structured good and so it helps the flow out in your piece...also lose the ~ things around your rhyming words....but keep at it.
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