1st dude came too basic...weak...nothig good at all....Aesthetic came too complex, but seeing how wack his opponent was this is a no brainer....Aesthetic, u should work on shortnening ur bars a little so they flow better, but other than that ur verse was pretty tite...
vote- Aesthetic
btw can u vote on this?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107780