Ok, Here's the breakdown:

Eyi -

Kid Dared To Accept The Challenge, But Wishin HE Never Seen ME Now/
Cause Sytez’ll Place His “Body In A Vase,“ Kind Of Like The “Geni Style”/(cremated)
^^OK opener, nothin special
Delete This Child Off The Face Of The Earth, Commit Suicide After You Die Man/
And “Cut Limbs Off Of Ya Spirit” To Say That I “Shortened Ya Life Span”/
^^second line was good
Ya Lines Bland, Postin Wack Bars, Acutally Thinkin That You Can Take Me/
Leave His Body “Blue & Black” Like HE Entered “Kick” Fights Wit “Tracy McGrady”/
^^eh...OK
Challengin Eyi-Sytez In Our Sub-Forum Like He Really Was Dope, And Wasn’t/
Hell, I Even Tried To Find Ya Talent Level, Discovered IT Was Close to Nothing/
^^ok punch
No Need To Think Of A Come Back, This Battle IS Ended And Finished/
Guess You Should Stay Away From FrontLines, Don’t Even Recommend You Attend It/
^^Eh....OK
Faggot BS’n In The Crew Forum Like He Really Was Gonna Serve Us The Bone/
Kicked Him “One Forum Down“, Now “Wackness Emergency’s” His Permanent Home/
^^Mean punch
Go Ahead And Dodge The BAttle, Follow In Ya Leader’s Footsteps For Change/
Couldn’t “Hold KnowleDge” Wit A Small “BookSHelf Attacted TO Ya Frame”/
^^weak closer

Overall it was an OK verse, could use more personals and better punches, but you def got potential

and Da_Killa -

Think cause my mane said Kid i was gon take it easy,
ill give u a bat, i'll no show and you still couldn't beat me,
^^OK opener, decent punch, kind of played though
Ya Syte must be blurred, cause ya bluffed these words,
unlike these other rappers you've battled i crush weak herbs,
^^eh...no
Dog ya to soft Like a babies ass and ya sex lifes full of dicks,
Just call this nigga baby powder he's on that Johnson&Johnson shit,
^^LMAO good punch
im armed and ill bomb this bitch, leave his his crew in shambles,
cause one less bitch in the streetz is one less to handle,
^^eh...
i'll leave his body like his structure fucked up and dismantled,
cause his punches hit like slow d-ends on qb scrambles,
^^Ok punch, original
just missin why switch to rappin dog it aint for you,
ima do a favor to ya crew by oustin you,
^^eh.... no
Now the EyI-SyTeZ been hendered, he didn't know what he was doin,
I would finish by kickin ya ass but im already a shoe in.
Nice closer LOL

Da_Killa had all the good punches, need more personals, but all around a good read. my vote goes to Killa for a much better verse all around.

pz