Yes I'm a newbie, but after this you'll really think I'm not.
When I drop my verse, you feel like you just been shot.
My verbs and adverbs hit you with everything I got
while your nouns stay limp in your hands like your cock.
Yes KLO's the name, and I'm about to explain
why battling me is the worst kind of pain.
You're just a bitch, yeah, don't even continue;
you'll need a support group after the raping I'ma give you.
Don't even drop your shit, you might as well eat it;
the nutrional value is high, you probably need it
and the stains on your teeth are less humiliating than being defeated.
this was an aiight verse, but it could be used on anyone...Lacks personals
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Klo don't try to escape, I kill kids with lines in a jolt..
I put out the light in ya head, u have no time to re volt..
to get the win with good character, he's methodly hoping...
two wrongs dont make a right, so you need ethical motive..
I aint readin ur verse, cuz u prolly aint rhymin, fuck..
this little bitch tried checkin in after his time was up..
my lines are based in truth, givin you some pounding..
ur lines are awestricken, cuz they're all dumb founded
dont give me this newbie shit, im already past it
im just wonderin why yall like gettin ya ass whipped ?
This verse is much more personal
Punches - Feeble's verse contained more harder hitting personal punches
Multi - Feeble took this category
Wordplay - Feeble had one verse follow by another stronger verse.
Flow - Flow was about a tie
Complexity - Feeble used a better array of vocab which lead to a better verse
I vote Feeble Minded in this battle.
Please drop honest votes here...
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