Thread: Typo vs CAMROK
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Old 01-27-04, 03:04 PM   #23
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Wordplay: Typo (had one)
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You couldn't "Stand Up" if Ludacris showed you how
Best line, this line could've been so fucking ill if you added another wordplay, like this

You couldn't 'Stand Up' to 'Bullies' if Ludacris showed you how

Not m uch thought in it, but if you pu a little more in it, that line could've been really good.

Vote - Camrok
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