--[Flow]---
Thought the flow here was nice, you had some dope internals in there, and as the peice progressed so did your structure..seemed to fit better towards the end...but it was pretty good all of the way through.

--[Vocab]--
Vocab was somewhat restricted..seemed to want to get out but was caged in..ya know..? It was only a key afterall but felt like that potential was there but it just wasn't showing.

--[Concept]--
Lokoed at it and thought - not another love song!! lol, but you added a dope first person veiw to it, some real emotion and real feelin's expressed in this piece, made it hit home a little more..although it had a little "Kim" feel about it:

"All of this pain you left me, now its just me facing it…
Cause you did so much to hurt me you fucking bitch…
Saying that you loved me, but your off sucking dick…
All of this going on behind my back you big slut…"

--[Overall]--
Was nice...you had some fleunt flow and you showed some good real emotions in this piece...3/5..had alot more potential than was showed, howver you said it was only a Key so it was good from the perspective.