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Old 01-27-04, 04:37 PM   #6
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i actualy voted on this battle...


Born to Kill can't write text, all of his dickriders are in denial...
Like come on, Houston lacks talent...just look at American Idol!

sayin he cant write text could mean that he can do audio, alot of newbies say stuff like that, stay away from it. Like Wog said, the celeb punches are played out

How good can this guy really be, with the abbreviation B2K
Just like his favourite singing group...Born to Kill's so yesterday!

again wit the celeb stuff.... Alphabet jokes are also played too, and im sure his favorite group isnt B2K

Yes we say B2K, when asked, "who's RB's biggest badass?"
Dam straights he's hardcore! he watches WWE broadcasts!

Im guessin it was ment to be funny but it wasnt.... you needed a better set up and again the celeb shit is played

He doesn't realize they use blood packets, still thinks its blades
Lord...its sad fake documentaries influence the people of today!

Not really a direct punch.. make sure you aim it at him

Seriously...besides houstans, who cares about houstans anyway
Only thing thats worth ass-kin ya is, "Have u ever seen Beyonce?"

This was decent... but you already talked about where he lived and about houstans up at the start

Im puttin Marques(marks) on Houston, have this southerner "scurred"
I've won this battle cuz guess what B2K...You got served!

This was an ok closing... u played off houston and his name alot... go for different personals


Btk won because he had better punches and personals.. see the thread that feeble made about Good Personals, it will help you alot

your personals were basic and didnt have very good set up... try to not focus on the same ones and make them more complex... metas can add complexity. You also dont need all the !!!! and """ around ya words... most people get your punches and personals and you dont need to point em out. lastly.. never explain a persoanl/punch in a verse... wait till the end and explain it.
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