^ yup thats basically what a filler line is... dont need 10 lines with punches in em so u just add in some shit that basically glorifys yaself and isnt really a punch at all

make sure u aim punches at them...

the retardation got emotional and opened his gift
only to find out that is weaker alias is still a bitch

^ like that wasnt really aimed at him and didnt hit hard... your set up coula been much better and you coula expaned on the punch and how his alias is a bitch

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