I read this last night but I didn't reply. Sorry 'bout that. Or.. uh.. not sorry?

Anyway, I still say you've gotta be one of the best, if not the best, poet that Rapbattles.com has ever seen. And I aint just be blowing smoke up your ass either.

You've got the techinical aspects to this down. You've got the flow and everything that makes this a great read. I didn't like the line with the germ though. Seemed too... I dunno. Some words are just not ment to be rhymed with. But otherwise, damn, it was something.

L.A.STR~E~TZ was right. Most people can relate to this poem in one way or another. Some, like me, know what it's like to be the guy in this. Hm... I never did say I was sorry... damn.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.