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IP:
Great piece you wrote. The flow was good, along with the structure. tyou had a good rhyme scheme, nice multies. i enjoyed this line
Don’t wanna die an old man that’s done nuthin but crawl
Im a young man running for the haul of living enthralled
I really liked that line...hit hard..creative...very meaningful...great piece...
if you could...hit up something in my sig...thanks
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