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Old 01-27-04, 06:57 PM   #3
Dev
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thought you came at the topic well.... quite a broad one, so could have come from any angle,... the way you hit it way portrayed well with the imagery and building of the pivture.... nice approach... thought in some places the rhyming could have transitioned smoother.... but all in all decent drop...
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